Tuesday, October 6, 2015






 Love Yourself


Have you ever felt like you’re not good enough? That you’re not beautiful? I believe that everyone is beautiful in their own way. I hate seeing girls put themselves down for not having the perfect body or the prettiest face. No one should be put down for not being perfect because honestly, who is? No one is perfect, but everyone is beautiful and that is something that we should all notice. 


I, myself have been very insecure for many years. I put myself down a lot even though I know that I shouldn’t. I know I’m not the only one that thinks this way because I’ve seen many girls put themselves down for the same reason.  We get called fat or ugly just because we don’t add up to society’s expectations. Society perfect girl is a curvy, skinny, small waist, big thighs, tall, and a perfect face. There is no woman in this world that looks like that. Everyone has something different, everyone is beautiful but society has made us girls think that we aren’t.


Girls will do anything to be accepted by society. They will pay thousands of dollars to fix their bodies so that they won’t feel insecure. We need to realize that everyone has flaws. We have to learn to accept ourselves and forget about society’s standards. I’ve learn to ignore when people insult me because I know they say it because that’s what society has made them believe. Even if a girl were to love there selves they still get insulted. You’ll get called conceited, or people will say, “Why does she think she’s pretty? She’s so ugly”.

          Even the most beautiful girl has her flaws. I see girls that won’t even step a foot outside because they don’t have make up on. I don’t understand why girls do that. Why can’t we accept ourselves the way God made us?  There’s nothing wrong with having flaws. Just be yourself, because the only person it should matter to is you! You aren’t born to please anyone.

12 comments:

  1. I really like how you used a lot questions to explain your way of thinking. It's symbolized as a way of raging out at people who are judgmental. One thing I suggest is using more of your own personal experience to try and connect with the readers.

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  2. I agree with you because, sometimes people will judge you and that makes us feel sad, or make us have a low self esteem. But as you said all that matters is that we love ourselves.

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  3. Hello Grecia, yes I agree, I believe every girl is pretty and unique in their own ways. I believe society is one of the biggest issue because they make girls think we are not good enough. We should love each flaws we have. You should added more about your experience.

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  4. i agree also because many people are put down and being called ugly by others just because they aren't good looking. Society has messed a lot of people thinking they have to be good looking to fit in.

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  5. I agree with you. Most girls do a lot and almost everything to get accepted by society.

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  6. I agree everyone is beautiful in their own way.

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  7. I love your story and like how you even put yourself in that category of being insecure.

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  8. We like your essay and we agree on everything but, we would have loved to hear more about your personal experience. - kenya,evelin

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  9. I agree, everyone is beautiful in their own way.

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  10. You really made some changes from your original! Do you notice how multiple people suggested that you talk more about yourself? Opening up about our own feelings and experiences can be so hard, but it truly connects us with our readers.

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