Love Yourself
Have you ever felt like you’re not good enough? That you’re
not beautiful? I believe that everyone is beautiful in their own way. I hate
seeing girls put themselves down for not having the perfect body or the
prettiest face. No one should be put down for not being perfect because
honestly, who is? No one is perfect, but everyone is beautiful and that is
something that we should all notice.
I, myself have been very insecure
for many years. I put myself down a lot even though I know that I shouldn’t. I know I’m not the only one that thinks this
way because I’ve seen many girls put themselves down for the same reason. We get called fat or ugly just because we
don’t add up to society’s expectations. Society perfect girl is a curvy,
skinny, small waist, big thighs, tall, and a perfect face. There is no woman in
this world that looks like that. Everyone has something different, everyone is
beautiful but society has made us girls think that we aren’t.
Girls will do anything to be
accepted by society. They will pay thousands of dollars to fix their bodies so
that they won’t feel insecure. We need to realize that everyone has flaws. We
have to learn to accept ourselves and forget about society’s standards. I’ve
learn to ignore when people insult me because I know they say it because that’s
what society has made them believe. Even if a girl were to love there selves
they still get insulted. You’ll get called conceited, or people will say, “Why
does she think she’s pretty? She’s so ugly”.
I really like how you used a lot questions to explain your way of thinking. It's symbolized as a way of raging out at people who are judgmental. One thing I suggest is using more of your own personal experience to try and connect with the readers.
ReplyDeleteI agree with you because, sometimes people will judge you and that makes us feel sad, or make us have a low self esteem. But as you said all that matters is that we love ourselves.
ReplyDeleteHello Grecia, yes I agree, I believe every girl is pretty and unique in their own ways. I believe society is one of the biggest issue because they make girls think we are not good enough. We should love each flaws we have. You should added more about your experience.
ReplyDeletei agree also because many people are put down and being called ugly by others just because they aren't good looking. Society has messed a lot of people thinking they have to be good looking to fit in.
ReplyDeleteSOC though
ReplyDeleteI agree with you. Most girls do a lot and almost everything to get accepted by society.
ReplyDeleteI agree everyone is beautiful in their own way.
ReplyDeleteI love your story and like how you even put yourself in that category of being insecure.
ReplyDeleteWe like your essay and we agree on everything but, we would have loved to hear more about your personal experience. - kenya,evelin
ReplyDeleteI do agree with you too girl.
ReplyDeleteI agree, everyone is beautiful in their own way.
ReplyDeleteYou really made some changes from your original! Do you notice how multiple people suggested that you talk more about yourself? Opening up about our own feelings and experiences can be so hard, but it truly connects us with our readers.
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